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John Nada's avatar

Ahh, any poem that sings of the body in the way you have here is a favorite of mine, fine job!!

Lee Arnold's avatar

Beautiful and powerful.

David Rizzo's avatar

I really like your love poetry GK. It shows a true depth of feeling without sentimentality.

G. K. Allum's avatar

What lovely sentiment and I’m honored.

Poetry Tracks In the Snow's avatar

The writing and ending are gorgeous and worth rereading numerous times. Thank you 💛

G. K. Allum's avatar

I am so glad it landed with you :)

Graeme Outerbridge's avatar

How Poetic!^^

Alix Klingenberg's avatar

Stunning

G. K. Allum's avatar

Thank you, what resonated with you?

Graeme Outerbridge's avatar

It’s a murder of crows^^