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c.g. rae's avatar

i feel this in the bottom of my heart

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Emma Steel's avatar

Regret is a shallow grave

we dig for ourselves

to make the past more bearable

because we can bury it

cover it with dirt

and visit the marker when we feel guilty

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Tina Rogers's avatar

Sometimes less is more, and this is perfect.

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G. K. Allum's avatar

The economy of the line.

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Fanen Chiahemen's avatar

It packs a punch, and the way it looks on the page -- as a block of text -- really works for it.

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The Sawyer's Daughter's avatar

For some strange reason, this made me smile. Awesomeness! Well done.

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G. K. Allum's avatar

I am glad that happened :)

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