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MERU

Civilisation is hooped together, brought

Under a rule, under the semblance of peace

By manifold illusion; but man's life is thought,

And he, despite his terror, cannot cease

Ravening through century after century,

Ravening, raging, and uprooting that he may come

Into the desolation of reality:

Egypt and Greece, good-bye, and good-bye, Rome!

Hermits upon Mount Meru or Everest,

Caverned in night under the drifted snow,

Or where that snow and winter’s dreadful blast

Beat down upon their naked bodies, know

That day bring round the night, that before dawn

His glory and his monuments are gone.

W.B. YEATS

Thank you for your poem. It put me in mind of Yeats's MERU which has been on my mind these days, so I'm not sure if the connection is appropriate or legitimate. There's a gospel song I learned from a wonderfully cynical friend, now fairly long gone, which he sang--we were driving somewhere many, many years ago--with magnificently naive fervor:

I PUT MY TRUST IN NOTHING LESS

THAN JESUS' BLOOD

AND RIGHTEOUSNESS

I SHALL NOT SEEK

A SWEETER FRAME

BUT WHOLLY LEAN

ON JESUS' NAME.

Chorus:

ON CHRIST THE SOLID

ROCK I STAND

ALL OTHER GROUND

IS SINKING SAND

ALL OTHER GROUND

IS SINKING SAND.

I think the name of the hymn was SINKING SAND. My late friend, David O. Roberts, who roved Rocky Mountain hot sprngs with his mule Janie, completed to his satisfaction a trilogy he titled CORPS OF DISCOVERY, on the Lewis & Clark self-published on his HOKA-HEY PRESS, individually titled, MANDAN, O THE JOY, and THE RETURN. He said he rewrote page after page until self-assured it was a good as good as Tolstoy, quoted in the epigraph to the whole: "For a historian considering the achievement of a certain aim, there are heroes; for the artist treating man's relation to all sides of life there cannot and should not be heroes, but there should be men."--Leo Tolstoy [I don't think David intended to ruffle women's feathers. If I'd asked him, he'd probable have insisted Tolstoy's distinction between heroes and men was no endorsement of either.)

I share with you, and Substack, as I always do, what's on my mind. David published THE RETURN, the last volume of CORPS OF DISCOVERY, in 2004. He died a few years later, survived by four children, a son and three daughters, and at least one grandson in Canyon City, Arizona, who I'd hear call him Grandpa whenever I reached him there on the phone.

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I like your Domestic Sonnets, G.K. 🤗

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