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Thomas Love Seagull's avatar

Beautiful and tender.

KFitz's avatar

This one got me and has such profound resonance with me + my experience. Beautiful as always ❤️

David Rizzo's avatar

Really nice. The bittersweet memories of love. One can sense the darkness falling and the long nights, and lovers perhaps glimpsing each othe’s faces by candlelight or maybe by a fireplace. This poem sparks and generates all sorts of associations that ripple out of the poem like the concentric rings in a pond after a stone has been tossed into it.

Nazish Nasim's avatar

That's really beautiful ❤️

shaun tenzenmen's avatar

An elegant write. 👏