This has a fine cinematic quality, like a still from a movie. What is a wevet? It has me thinking of the cartoon character--Yosemite Sam?--calling Bugs Bunny a "wascally wabbit."
I like the exposure. The unsettle, the poignant punch that you land to the pice pulling in the other direction incorporating common sentences. I learnt spun light that I actually like very much. Wevet I though you ment to make a sort of tautology with white indicating off white (but I just read your reply about spider web).I feel you way I though about one meaning instead of the other. you write wevet-white using an em dash. Thinking to refer to a spider web I would not probably use it (a white spider web) that’s all. It’s also true that I’m not mother tongue and in Italian we don’t use em dashes and I feel always uneasy to use them.
You trust the reader is able to meet you where you led. Nice
Tenderly, honestly and delicately expressed.
Tender and true
Thank you
This has a fine cinematic quality, like a still from a movie. What is a wevet? It has me thinking of the cartoon character--Yosemite Sam?--calling Bugs Bunny a "wascally wabbit."
Wevet is a word from Dorset, England that means the fine spider webs.
Gotcha. Thnx.
Gorgeous. Under one roof, multiple realities.
as everyone else has said, "tender" describes this piece. i love the last verse the most.
I like the exposure. The unsettle, the poignant punch that you land to the pice pulling in the other direction incorporating common sentences. I learnt spun light that I actually like very much. Wevet I though you ment to make a sort of tautology with white indicating off white (but I just read your reply about spider web).I feel you way I though about one meaning instead of the other. you write wevet-white using an em dash. Thinking to refer to a spider web I would not probably use it (a white spider web) that’s all. It’s also true that I’m not mother tongue and in Italian we don’t use em dashes and I feel always uneasy to use them.
You trust the reader is able to meet you where you led. Nice