Raking The Leaves

[Tabby Ivy]

beautiful. endings. discovery. release - of joy, acceptance.

[Jesse Davis]

Wonderfully written, thank you for embodying show don't tell 🫶🏻

[Joy Moore]

Thank you for this.

[Judi Lynne Judy, M.A.]

Lovely. Western Washington? Me too. I love the parallel drawn, the language and the tears.

[Amrita Skye Blaine]

So tender.

[Connie Newbauer]

This is beautiful!

[Sam Aureli]

I had to read the final two stanzas a few times before the gravity finally set in.

[Writer's Corner]

Achingly beautiful, painful too. Your poem awakes compassion. Endings hurts. Love, Maria