The form definitely adds to the wit, excellent syllable structuring.
The burden of being imprisoned by our own voice despite having an affinity with it - is one reflection amongst others that came to mind. Another thought it provoked was the transformation of finding a new voice as the self evolves, not always in the prettiest of ways.
That's great. Richly gritty and whip-cracking. The last time I saw Anthony (very briefly, a bit part in an ensemble of sorry celebrities), he was flogging Himalayan honey and Blue Flower Tea as a cure for Altzhiemers and for $$$!
What a fun and witty piece. What is Kitrap?
Kitsap is a county in Washington State.
I see—and I misspelled it! Thanks.
This was great, I didn't think horror could be amusing!
Another great write. I like how you show the danger of chasing greatness in the wrong way.
Sophisticated interplay between form and content here — appreciate the second-line line breaks that almost disguise the end rhyme.
Sneaking suspicion you are a Thom Gunn fan.
Weird and wonderful. I'd love to see this illustrated in a little book Mr. Gorey might have made.
What is that you want to say here, Greg?
The form definitely adds to the wit, excellent syllable structuring.
The burden of being imprisoned by our own voice despite having an affinity with it - is one reflection amongst others that came to mind. Another thought it provoked was the transformation of finding a new voice as the self evolves, not always in the prettiest of ways.
If I had a public voice it would be Morgan Freeman's. Captivating, soothing and yet, commanding
93? Hmmm
That's great. Richly gritty and whip-cracking. The last time I saw Anthony (very briefly, a bit part in an ensemble of sorry celebrities), he was flogging Himalayan honey and Blue Flower Tea as a cure for Altzhiemers and for $$$!