It should go without saying that I love me a grape: its just small, perfect, with a peel on it that you can bite through or surgically remove and in the center, a deceptively simple beauty that expands fractally as you move the camera in tighter. Fantastic work. Cheers!
Short poems can be some of the most profound and hit me the hardest 😩
I absolutely love this. It makes me feel like it’s lightly raining outside. Beautiful.
That's a lovely way of describing this poem.
Thank you.
It’s actually nice that you’re reading
Undoubtedly better to have your own voice than an AI. Beautiful poem 💐
Perfect, like a grape.
First time anyone has compared my poetry to grapes! Thanks
It should go without saying that I love me a grape: its just small, perfect, with a peel on it that you can bite through or surgically remove and in the center, a deceptively simple beauty that expands fractally as you move the camera in tighter. Fantastic work. Cheers!
Yes, include your voice reading it. I do the same and I think it is a unique layer of your presence in the piece
Love the brevity, makes the reader want more. You have a good spoken word voice.
oh I love this, so elegant and dewy
Poetry for me is like wine. I really don’t know how it works but feel like I know something is wonderful when I drink it in. This is wonderful 😊
Enjoyed this short and it prompted the below:
wilted flowers match my love
stretched to the end of life
color fading so that it is changing form
from living to a fossilized form
Love this 👏👏👏
Okay beautiful and gentle
This is beautiful! >3
lovely
Touching.💝
short and sweet!